Wednesday, September 19, 2007

Planning Worksheet

Who will be the audience of the document you want to write? Name a specific person or group.

  • The audience for my lay document will be my peers (other students within CU's collegiate community). The audience for my expert document(s) will be my hypothetical boss and my client (my peers).

What specific problem, faced by the audience, do you hope to solve through your document?

  • With my lay document I hope to solve the "so what's next" problem by providing my audience with a document that will demonstrate to them how to build upon the lobbying basics that they already use in their daily lives when lobbying for and/or against change in politics and public advocacy.
  • With my expert document I hope to validate my lay document by employing both the theoretical and practical components of the document in a lobbying campaign of my peers choosing. In other words, I'm going to lobby for my peers to lobby all the while lobbying for their (our) cause. How am I going to accomplish this task? The answer is simple. I'm going to challenge the "I'm just one person" mentality that prevents so many of us from taking action and replace it with an empowering message--a message that you, that i, that we can make a difference.

How do you know the problem is a pressing problem for the audience? List particular difficulties the audience faces as a result of the problem.

  • I know the "so what's next" problem is a pressing problem for my lay audience because I often find myself engaged in deep philosophical discourse with my peers following a speech, an article read in a newspaper, or something of the likes... We're enraged and we're complaining. We know exactly what needs to happen. To us it makes so much sense. How can the politicians, administration, whomever get it so wrong. We have strong opinions and great ideas and that's where it ends. We don't know what to do with those strong opinions and great ideas. We don't know what's next; because we don't know what's next we do nothing and nothing changes.
  • I know the "I'm just one person" problem is a pressing problem for my expert audience because they need people who will not only receive their message but who will ultimately take action. They need people who not only know what to do next but who realize that they have something to contribute; that everyone has something to contribute. People who understand that the biggest part of lobbying is getting the message out there while enlisting others along the way and taking action. If the "I'm just one person" problem isn't addressed then my expert audience faces the problem of trying to envoke action in a society that is indifferent because they no longer believe in the political endeavors they studied in their history books. They "know" better now--no longer do they believe that every vote counts, every vote is equal. So...why bother voting, right?

What type (genre) of document do you want to write?

  • Both my lay and expert document(s) will be informational documents. The lay document will be a "how to" document and the expert document will be a "how to" applied document.

How will the document reach the audience? If you hope the document will appear in a larger publication, name the publication and explain how you know the publication will reach your intended audience. If the document will stand alone, explain how you hope to get it into the hands of your audience.

  • My lay document will stand alone. I will distribute copies of the document to CUSG. The reason I chose to distribute the documents to CUSG is because they lobby along side their fellow classmates in both Columbia and DC throughout the year.
  • My expert document will stand alone as well. I will be "pitching" my expert document(s) to my client/boss. This can be done in a board meeting, at a business lunch, etc. I will also attempt to utilize some of my expert documents such as t-shirts, fliers, posters, and articles on campus. I will enlist my friends in my lobbying effort by having them help sell t-shirts, hang posters, distribute fliers, spread the word...

How exactly will the document alleviate the audience's problem? Describe specific outcomes that you expect.

  • My lay document will be utilized in a workshop to teach the first time lobbyist what lobbying is and how to lobby effectively all the while reinforcing what the old timers already know. Hence, you'd know longer have students who although very passionate about a particular cause have no idea how to lobby it to Congress or the Senate. In short, my lay document will alleviate my audience's problem by teaching them how to "unite wisdom with eloquence." After all, it doesn't matter what you know if you can't communicate it effectively (effectively being in a way facilitative of understanding and then action).
  • Anyone can complain... we complain about the increase in both instate and out of state tuition every year, we complain about the parking situation (or lack there of) on campus, we complain about the cost of textbooks, we all complain. How many of us seek action? You'd think since we all complain that we'd all take action. Unfortunately more often than not that's not the case. My expert document, therefore, will alleviate the audience's "I'm just one person" problem by showing them how I--just one person--made a difference by lobbying. Hopefully, my showing them this will not only empower them but will also drive them to act.

8 comments:

Megan Boyce said...

I like the idea of making t-shirts and fliers and the such, but I think these are much more lay documents than expert ones. I think it will be interesting doing a lobbying project, because you are right, we all complain, but never to the right people and we don't know how to do it right. I also think going to the CUSG is a good idea and you may even be able to market some of your ideas to them. They could possibly be your client. I'm sure I will have more to suggest after I see your presentation in class today, but it looks like you're off to a great start.

Megan Boyce said...

After hearing your presentation in class, I now understand what you meant. I think your idea is great and will be willing to tell you things that could be lobbied. I look forward to seeing what you produce.

Benjamin said...

I liked your presentation. It sounds like you have good ideas, especially if you feel you'll be able to accomplish them in a semester's time. The only place where I'm confused is whether you are using a particular subject to lobby or if you are going to lobby on the subject of lobbying (ie. motivate others to take a stand for different causes). I guess it will become more clear as we move along this semester. Anyways, good luck and I look forward to seeing your final product.

Jennifer said...

With the understanding that you are lobbying in order to persuade others to lobby for themselves, which i'm hoping is right, I think your presentation sounds great. One suggestion I might make- nowadays, it seems as though people are age rely so heavily on technology for everything. Perhaps if you created some sort of website for your lay document, which outlines the ways in which students, or people our age, can lobby for things, you could reach more people. I do also thing that tshirts and fliers is a good thing to do, too, but if you found a way to get a link to that website you created on the school website, on the homepage, that'd be a cool way to get people to say, "Hey what's that, I want to read on."...Just a suggestion, but other than that, I think everything looks great! :)

Courtney said...

Sharon,

Maybe you could somehow incorporate past lobbying campaigns, specifically ones that students have done, in order to make more tangible to your audience that this is possible. A lot of times in situations like this one, people will say well that's all well and good that now I know how to do it, but how will I know it's going to work?" If they see that a student much like themselves has already done something like this successfully, they might be more inclined to do it for something they truly are passionate about. Just a thought...

Sharon said...

Thank you all for taking the time to comment on my blog! I really appreciate all of the encouragement and the feedback received. That being said, I wanted to be sure and take the time to attend to what you all have said.

Megan,
I'm glad that my presentation helped to clarify some of your questions pertaining to my lobbying project. I'm excited to learn of causes that you'd like to have me lobby on your behalf.

Benjamin,
I'm glad that you liked my presentation! I know it sounds like a lot to take on but the whole idea behind lobbying is getting a message out there and facilitating both dialogue and action amongst your audience. I don't think that I, one person, can do it ALL on my own but I do think that I can get others excited enough about the campaign that they'll want to make it their own as well. So, if things go as planned (crossing my fingers)and my lobbying campaign is as effective as I hope it will be then the Clemson student body (including you :P) should be involved in the process. You mentioned you were confused as to what I'm lobbying for. I want to try and clarify that as well. I'm not lobbying to get you all (my peers) to lobby persay. The plan is to find out what you guys would like to see changed on Clemson's campus and then to take on that cause. In that sense, I am lobbying for you (you all are like my clients). I am hoping, however, that my lobbying for something that you are very passionate about will encourage you to get involved in the lobbying process. This is just a personal goal of mine. I hope I've clarified any confusion you may have had. Let me know if you have any other questions.

Jennifer,
I think you may have gotten confused at some point during my presentation. I'm not lobbying to get others to lobby. I'm lobbying for "you" in the sense that I am asking what are you passionate about. What do you want to see changed on campus? I'm then selecting a cause to lobby for/or against based on the suggestions that I get from you all. So, ultimately my goal is to create and implement an effective lobbying campaign that my peers have an invested interest in. My personal goal, however, is to inspire you all to get involved in the lobbying process. About my lay document... CUSG has a huge lobbying group that travels to Columbia, SC and the District of Columbia. Any lobbying done on behalf of the University by students is done through CUSG. Keeping this in mind, I felt that coming up with a "workshop" package would be more advantageous then a website or another for of lay document. My reasoning behind this is because it is one thing to read about lobbying and it is another thing to actually apply what you're reading in a group setting. It's kind of like preparing for a speech. Sure you can read your outline off of a computer screen and it'll help to some degree but actually going through your presentation in front of someone in a setting that "mocks" where you will actually be giving your speech will prove more advantageous. What do you think?

Courtney,
It's funny that you made the suggestion that you did. I agree with you. In fact, because I know that more often than not people (students especially) need to see someone like themselves doing something effectively before they can see themselves doing it I decided to actually create and implement a lobbying campaign for Clemson University students (our class specifically). So, not only will you all see a student carrying out a lobbying campaign but you will see a Clemson Student carrying out a lobbying campaign that you have a personal interest in.

Again, thanks for the comments! I appreciate all of your advice and feedback.

LindseyS said...

I know that we were talking about in class that you were looking for possible lobbying topics for your project. I really think the parking issue on campus would be a great idea. I think it could be said that the majority of Clemson students would be passionate about this topic and would probably be more willing to get involved in this than in a humanitarian campaign. I know that it's wonderful to try to help out society through humanitarian efforts, but sometimes, I think you can get the most support and effort from issues that hit close to home. I know that I would be more inclined to act on an issue that directly affected me. Hope this helps some!

Kerry said...

A cause for your lobbying efforts could work in conjunction with Benjamin and maybe encourage students to seek out opportunities to help the aging population in our community. You would really have a chance to change a lot of people's lives if it worked out well! Looking forward to seeing how your project progresses.